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3 - As with any good paper reliable sources are a must. I liked how elmore used sources from not only the scholarly side of of the coin such as the researchers, but she also included the personal thoughts of the people around her like her principle. when it comes to factual evidence, word from a scientist or researcher helps to give credibility to the thought process, while the personal thoughts of the people that live in the moment help to frame the context of the argument

4 - Every good paper should have subject headings and this essay was no different. Headers help not only the reader, but the writer to group focal arguments into like fields. It also helps with the flow of the paper, so that the reader will stay interested.

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1 - I love charts and graphs. just as with the chart on poverty, most people understand things a lot better when the can use more then one of their senses. I my self like to see written ideas expressed in a organized manner such as a chart or a graph. It also adds a more professional quality and shows that you understand what you are writing about.